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When you walk away

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It's like the death of a sunset
when the night steals the last golden rays
and the earth
starved for sunlight
feels the cold caress of night creeping upon her.
The stars that shine so brightly are a bitter comfort,
for they may have beauty,
but no warmth to comfort her.
The black is endless when it settles fully,
Inky and thick it chokes,
it blurs,
like tears in the corner of your eyes.
Yet, the night is only a temporary darkness,
like our parting,
the sun will rise again
and bring us together
basking in the warmth of morning
and it's brightest star.
Did you all know that the morning star is really Venus? I found that interesting. A symbol of love and romance that appears sometimes in the morning sometimes in the evening and rest of the time is invisible because of it's location to the sun. How fitting that love's planet is so complex....ignore my babblings I'm sleepy and I miss her.
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I miss you too, love. That was a beautiful poem. Almost made me cry in front of my family... The sun will rise on us soon again.